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your next essay is about to be a masterpiece once you do this so your teacher is not a fan of one part of your essay can you see why bananas are better than apples they have more vitamin a they have more phosphorus however both have lots of vitamin c now compare that to this bananas are better than apples although both have lots of vitamin c bananas have 5 times as much vitamin a and 3 times as much phosphorus for your next essay vary your sentence lengths to break up the monotony quantify your claims and follow for another tip